請問這句英文不道地嗎？是中式英文嗎？

請教大家，下面這句英文是中式英文嗎？或是不夠道地嗎？

I like to celebrate with my family because that has been the tradition in our household for as long as I can remember. 

我有問過一個在美國工作過20多年的英文老師，他說這句話是中式英文，正確應該如下：

I always celebrate (my) birthdays with family members because that is a family tradition we have followed since I was a child.

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請問他說的對嗎？ 我目前分辨不出好英文或壞英文，麻煩大家了，感謝！

你的英文句子是句構文法問題, 不是地道不地道的關係

另外,

英文句子和中文一樣, 要講究輕重、簡潔- 附屬子句要相較於主要子句短; 冗言贅字要減少, 以求brevity.

I always celebrate birthdays with my family members because of the family tradition.

to yep, 

所以簡單來說，這句的句構有錯嗎？

I like to celebrate with my family because that has been the tradition in our household for as long as I can remember. 

坦白說，這句英文是從一本英語面試的書擷取出來的（作者是補習班有20年教學經驗的英文名師），他其實還有一大段，但我總覺怪怪的，所以才有此一問。